Friday, April 15, 2011

"Change we can('t) believe in" is pretty spot on

Kamran Sheikh wrote an informative and seemingly neutral commentary on the President's proverbial "report card" pertaining to all the promises he made during his campaign for the Presidency.  The main points that he ran his platform off of are covered fairly well with the exception of making the legislative process transparent and doing away with the corrupt lobbyists.  The three main points that I believe the American people are most worried about are hit on well, those being gas, troops and taxes. 

Some of the points could've used more elaboration but given the word count constraints, space in the article was used wisely.  Overall the blog was effective in conveying the author's stance and was well written.

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